Friday, December 5, 2008

"Thunder and the Girl"

Once upon a time their was a girl that had a horse named Thunder. Thunder was exactly like thunder. He trembled, he rumbled, he was a horse that was brave. One day Thunder went out of the stable. He ran and played. When his little girl wanted to ride him he was gone. the little girl started to cry. Thunder heard her crying. She went inside. When Thunder got home, the little girl ran out. They hugged a big hug. The End.

7 comments:

  1. I love this story! It reminds me of being a little girl myself. Wonderful!!

    Love,
    Aunt Linda

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  2. What a wonderful story! I love this one, it is beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing it!

    Love
    Danielle

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  3. I know you love horses and the story about Thunder is a really good one.

    Love,
    Mimi

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  4. A very nice story.
    Will we read more about Thunder? Or will you write about something else next time?

    I will be waiting patently to see what you write next.

    Papa

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  5. Livi, I love your stories. I am already a big fan of your Thunder story and hope you write more about him and the girl who loves him.

    Robin

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  6. This story really shows off your storytelling abilities...keep up the good work!

    Pastor Mari

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  7. Liv--
    Your story it wonderful! We truly enjoyed reading it as a family. Keep up the good work! ~Miss you~
    Love
    Rachel, Jeremie & Cameron

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