Thursday, December 11, 2008

"The Snowman"

One day a snowman was eating some birch bark. He was a very happy snowman indead. He desied he would travel to see the world. Oh did I menchen birch bark is his favorite food? His name is Wall-e. When Wall-e went to see the world he came across a river.A hot river. Wall-e did not like the sound of that. Insted of swiming he jumped across some rocks. He got to the other side safely. His jurny beagan. He went over moutins seas woods. After a wile he started to melt! He had to get to Alaska quick! He cot a train! He got to Alasck in time! He met a poler bear named Randy. Randy gave him a ride."By Randy!" Wall-e called. He ran to santa! He toled santa he wanted to go home. Santa said "Okay"! Then he vroomed him back home in his slay. "Thankyou santa"! Wall-e caled."I realised the best plase to be is home"! The End

6 comments:

  1. Ooooh! Here's my snowman story, and it's just awesome. Great job, Liv.

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  2. Great story, Liv!!

    Love,

    Aunt Linda

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  3. Livie,
    I have really enjoyed your stories. You do a good job, keep up the good work.
    Love,
    Aunt Dorene

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  4. That was a really great story, Liv. I love snowmen because they are so round and lumpy!

    Love,
    Mimi

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  5. Hey Liv, Love the snowman story, you are so imaginitive! Keep the stories coming! I love reading them.

    Love
    Danielle

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  6. I love this story, Liv! You're a great writer!! And I heard that Santa LOVED this story, too!

    Love,
    Joey

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